Sunday, 16 November 2014

Introducing Author Josette Nabintu

Famous ESOL Pomaria Authors Club

The Gruffalo
Narrative - Retell
                                                                                        
One day a teeny-tiny mouse was walking into a deep dark forest and on the way the little teeny-tiny mouse met a fox.

‘Hi Little Mouse.  Where are you going?”  “I’m going to meet a gruffalo for lunch,” said the mouse.  “What?  A gruffalo?”  “ Well let me tell you what a gruffalo is.  A gruffalo has whiskers, pointy tusks and straight fur.  His favourite food is fox ice cream.”  “Goodbye Little Mouse!” And off the fox went.

Along went the mouse and up, up, up in the trees came down an owl. “Tooohoot!  Toohoot!  Toohoot!  Where are you going to Little Mouse?”  “I’m going to meet a gruffalo for lunch.”  “A gruffalo?  What’s a gruffalo?”  “What you don’t know what a gruffalo is?  Well let me tell you.  He has feet like rocks, crookered toes, knobbly knees and his favourite food is owl pie.”  “Toohoot!  Toohoot!  I must be going now.  Goodbye Little Mouse.”

Along went the mouse and in a log there was a ssssssnake.  “Where are you going Mouse?  Come and have tea in my log house.”  “It’s kind of you.  But no! I am going to meet an old friend of mine.  His name is Gruffalo.”  “What’s a gruffalo?”  “What? You don’t know what a gruffalo is.  Let me tell you what a gruffalo is.  He has sharp tiger-like claws, terrible terrible jaws, terrible rotten teeth and his favourite food is snake hotdog.”  “Goodbye Little Mouse.”  And off the snake went!

“Oh no!  Who is this?  It’s a gruffalo.  He has pointy ears, long sharp whiskers, a long slimey tongue, pointy tusks, straight fur, wolf like tail, feet like rocks, crookered toes, knobbly knees, sharp tiger-like claws, terrible jaws, terrible rotten teeth and he eats mice!”  The mouse is stuck in the gruffalo’s stomach!  That will teach him a lesson for telling lies!

By Josette Nabintu
Room 21





Introducing Author Sorya Out

                        Famous ESOL Pomaria Authors Club. 

The Icky Sticky Anteater

Narrative Retell

One beautiful bright day an anteater lived in a forest.  He preferred berries, plants and honey.  He was kind.
One day his family forced him to eat ants. So the other anteaters said, “EAT THEM YOU MUST!”  So he went to look for ants. 
He saw a hole.  “Zip!” and out came a mole.  He found another hole.  “Zip!”  and out came a snake. 
He found another hole and out came a rabbit.  He found something on his tongue.  It was an ant.  Phoo!  “I am not going to eat this,” said the anteater. 
So that night they had a party.


By Sorya Out


Introducing Author Hinolynn Talagi

Famous ESOL Pomaria Authors Club. 

The Gruffalo
Narrative - Retell

One day there was a teeny tiny mouse.  He was walking around the forest and the fox came and he said, “Come and have lunch in my underground house.”
The mouse said, “I’m going to have lunch with a gruffalo.”
The fox ran off to his underground house and the mouse said, “Goodbye.” And off he went. 
The owl said, “Come and have lunch in my tree house”.  The mouse said, “I’m going to have lunch with a gruffalo,” and the mouse went.
The mouse was walking around the forest and the snake came and said, “Come and have lunch in my underwood house.”  The mouse said, “I’m going to have lunch with a gruffalo.” “A gruffalo?” said the ssssnake.  The mouse went and he said, “Goodbye.” 
The mouse saw the Gruffalo. “Oh no help,”  said the little teeny tiny mouse.  “The Gruffalo is going to eat me,” said the teeny tiny mouse. And off they went to the snake’s underwood house. The snake was scared. 
After the teeny tiny mouse said, “Let’s go,” to the owl, and off they went. 
The owl was scared and the owl said, “Goodbye.” 
Off they went to the fox’s underground house.  The fox was scared and the fox said, “Goodbye.” 
The mouse said, “I’m going to eat the gruffalo for my lunch.”  The Gruffalo was scared and the gruffalo ran home like a big baby!

By Hinolyn Talagi



Introducing Author Rickson Olsson

Famous ESOL Pomaria Authors Club. 

The lion and the mouse.

Narrative Retell

One hot boiling sunny day a lion was sleeping and the lion woke up.   
Lion caught the mouse and laughed, and laughed and laughed. 
The mouse said, “I may help you one day Lion.”  The lion said, “Ha ha ha.” 

The lion was laughing so much he didn’t see a net and  walked into it.  The lion roared for help.

The mouse came and helped the lion get out of the net. 

The sun went down.  The mouse chewed the net and the mouse let the lion go.

The lion roared for help.

The mouse ran out of her hole.  ‘Eee-Eee,” said the mouse.

The lion said, “Thank you for helping me get out of the net.”

They were friends and safe.

By Rickson Olsson  Room 17



FAMOUS IN ESOL POMARIA - INTRODUCING TALENTED AUTHORS

NARRATIVE STORYTELLING


ESOL Shining Stars have been reading and writing narratives.

Let us share some of the creative narrative pieces published by our very own talented authors.

The authors used storyboarding to plan and sequence their retelling of a favourite narrative.

We welcome your comments.

Happy reading. 

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Saturday, 1 November 2014

GRATITUDE - SHOWING VALUE AND APPRECIATION

'GRATITUDE' - Being grateful. 

TO GIVE THANKS;  SHOW APPRECIATION FOR WHAT WE HAVE IN OUR LIVES.









 So what are you grateful for?








So what are you grateful for?
So what are you grateful for?

So what are you grateful for?

Please post what you are grateful for?

xo
ESOL SHINING STARS


WHANAU CONTRIBUTION - SHARE YOUR LANGUAGE

DAYS OF THE WEEK

In ESOL Shining Stars we are looking for ways for our whanau to share and value their home language.  

We are creating new displays in our classroom, celebrating the different languages in our COMMUNITY.

Please post the days of the week in their home language.  
Thank you for your contribution to make our classroom more welcoming for all cultures and languages. 
So how to you say/write..

MONDAY
TUESDAY
WEDNESDAY
THURSDAY
FRIDAY
SATURDAY
SUNDAY