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The lion and the mouse.
Narrative Retell
One hot boiling sunny day a lion was sleeping and the lion woke up.
Lion caught the mouse and laughed, and laughed and laughed.
The mouse said, “I may help you one day Lion.” The lion said, “Ha ha ha.”
The lion was laughing so much he didn’t see a net and walked into it. The lion roared for help.
The mouse came and helped the lion get out of the net.
The sun went down. The mouse chewed the net and the mouse let the lion go.
The lion roared for help.
The mouse ran out of her hole. ‘Eee-Eee,” said the mouse.
The lion said, “Thank you for helping me get out of the net.”
They were friends and safe.
By Rickson Olsson Room 17
Cool friendship between the lion and the mouse Rickson! Thank you for sharing your writing - Well done - Whaea Donna
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