Sunday, 16 November 2014

Introducing Author Senio Afamasaga Vavao

Famous ESOL Pomaria Authors Club

The lion and the mouse
Narrative - Retell
                                                                                        
One hot boiling sunny day a lion was sleeping and the mouse jumped on the lion.

‘I got you!” he said.  “Eeeee-eeeee,” said the mouse.  “Please let get your hands off me.  I will come and help you one day.”

The lion let the mouse go.  The mouse ran into her hole. 

The lion laughed at the mouse.  The humungous lion walked into the net and got into trouble. 

The mouse came and helped the lion get out of the net.

“You can help a big lion like me.  I will leave you alone again,”  said the lion.

By Senio Afamasaga-Vavao
Room 17






1 comment:

  1. Hi Senio - cute photo!!! I love the word 'humungous' that you used in your story - yes that lion was indeed large but the little mouse was the hero :) - Whaea Donna

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