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The lion and the mouse
Narrative -
Retell
One hot boiling sunny day a big lion was
asleep and the mouse jumped on the lion.
The lion woke up and he said to the mouse,
“Got you!” “Eee-Eee,” said the mouse.
“Please let me go. Please let me go. One day I may help you,” said the mouse.
The lion let the mouse go and the lion
laughed and laughed.
He didn’t see the net and he got stuck in the net.
He roared for help and the mouse said, “I
am coming. I can help you to get out of the
net with my sharp teeth,” said the
mouse.
She did and the lion said, “Thank
you.”
The lion said, “So am I.” They went home happy.
By Taine Tepapauoatua Room 13
Taine (left) with friends Annmarie and Manaomia.
Awesome story Taine! Well done! I love this story because even though the mouse was little (just like you) he could do amazing things to help another over 1000 times bigger! Keep writing those cool stories Taine. - Whaea Donna
ReplyDeleteI can see very good timework there Taine/Annmarie and manaomia and a good happy day
ReplyDeleteby Damien,H