FAMOUS ESOL POMARIA AUTHORS CLUB
The lion and the mouse
Narrative -
Retell
One hot boiling sunny day a lion was
sleeping in the desert.
A mouse came along and the lion said, “Got
you!”
The mouse said, ‘Eeee-Eeee! Please let me
go.” So the lion let the mouse go and ran to her hole.
The lion laughed and laughed because the
mouse said, “I may help you one day.”
The lion got trapped in the net.
The mouse came to help the lion.
The lion and the mouse were friends.
By Annmarie Mikaele Room 13
Annmarie (centre) with friends Taine (Left) and Manaomia (Right)
Really great narrative sis :-)
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Great retelling Ann Marie :) Well done - Whaea Donna
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