Sunday, 16 November 2014

Introducing Author Annmarie Mikaele

FAMOUS ESOL POMARIA AUTHORS CLUB

The lion and the mouse
Narrative - Retell
                                                                                        
One hot boiling sunny day a lion was sleeping in the desert.

A mouse came along and the lion said, “Got you!” 

The mouse said, ‘Eeee-Eeee! Please let me go.” So the lion let the mouse go and ran to her hole.

The lion laughed and laughed because the mouse said, “I may help you one day.”

The lion got trapped in the net. 

The mouse came to help the lion.

The lion and the mouse were friends.

By Annmarie Mikaele Room 13

Annmarie (centre)  with friends Taine (Left)  and Manaomia (Right)



2 comments:

  1. Really great narrative sis :-)

    Rachel

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  2. Great retelling Ann Marie :) Well done - Whaea Donna

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