Sunday, 16 November 2014

Introducing Author Marshall Tupai

FAMOUS ESOL POMARIA AUTHORS CLUB

The lion and the mouse
Narrative - Retell
                                                                                        
One hot boiling sunny day a lion was sleeping in a hot desert. 

A mouse came along and the lion grabbed it.  “Got you,” said the lion.

The mouse said, “Eeee-Eee-Eee!”  The mouse said, ‘I might help you one day.”

The lion laughed, “Ha! Ha! Ha!”  “A little mouse like you can’t help me.”

The lion got trapped in the net.  He roared, “Help me.  Who will help me?”

The mouse came along and chewed the net.

The lion ws free.

The lion said, “Thank you a lot.”  They were friends.

By Marshall Tupai  Room 13




3 comments:

  1. Hi Marshall, love your photo! Well done for publishing your story on the Blogg, would be great if you could show your Nana and Papa - Whaea Donna

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  2. really good retell marshall from HARLEY

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  3. really good retell marshall from HARLEY

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