FAMOUS ESOL POMARIA AUTHORS CLUB
The lion and the mouse
Narrative -
Retell
One hot boiling sunny day a lion was
sleeping in a hot desert.
A mouse came along and the lion grabbed
it. “Got you,” said the lion.
The mouse said, “Eeee-Eee-Eee!” The mouse said, ‘I might help you one day.”
The lion laughed, “Ha! Ha! Ha!” “A little mouse like you can’t help me.”
The lion got trapped in the net. He roared, “Help me. Who will help me?”
The mouse came along and chewed the net.
The lion ws free.
The lion said, “Thank you a lot.” They were friends.
By Marshall Tupai Room 13
Hi Marshall, love your photo! Well done for publishing your story on the Blogg, would be great if you could show your Nana and Papa - Whaea Donna
ReplyDeletereally good retell marshall from HARLEY
ReplyDeletereally good retell marshall from HARLEY
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