Famous ESOL Author Club
The Icky Sticky Anteater
Narrative Retell
One day there was an icky sticky frog. He was down by the lake. He looked at the fly and WOOP! Out came his tongue aiming at the fly. Slurp!
The fly was gone.
The frog was looking at the beetle crawling
down the tree. WOOP! Out came his tongue. Slurp!
The beetle was gone.
Shhhh!
Frog didn’t make a sound.
He just looked at the grasshopper hopping
by. WOOP! Out came his tongue. Slurp!
The grasshopper was gone.
The frog saw a beautiful butterly. WOOP!
Out came his tongue and GULP! The
frog was gone!
…. He was eaten by a fish!
By Bee Leung Wai Room 14
Hi Mr Bee - well done on writing your narrative! You have to come and read it! It must sound great with all the exclamation marks when it is read aloud! - Whaea Donna
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