Introducing Author Taine Tepapauoatua

FAMOUS ESOL POMARIA AUTHORS CLUB

The lion and the mouse

Narrative - Retell

                                                                                        

One hot boiling sunny day a big lion was asleep and the mouse jumped on the lion.

The lion woke up and he said to the mouse, “Got you!”  “Eee-Eee,” said the mouse.

“Please let me go.  Please let me go.  One day I may help you,” said the mouse.

The lion let the mouse go and the lion laughed and laughed. 

He didn’t see the net and he got stuck in the net.

He roared for help and the mouse said, “I am coming.  I can help you  to get out of the

net with my sharp teeth,” said the mouse. 

She did and the lion said, “Thank you.” 

The lion said, “So am I.”  They went home happy.

By Taine Tepapauoatua  Room 13

Taine (left) with friends Annmarie and Manaomia.

Introducing Author Annmarie Mikaele

FAMOUS ESOL POMARIA AUTHORS CLUB

The lion and the mouse

Narrative - Retell

                                                                                        

One hot boiling sunny day a lion was sleeping in the desert.

A mouse came along and the lion said, “Got you!” 

The mouse said, ‘Eeee-Eeee! Please let me go.” So the lion let the mouse go and ran to her hole.

The lion laughed and laughed because the mouse said, “I may help you one day.”

The lion got trapped in the net. 

The mouse came to help the lion.

The lion and the mouse were friends.

By Annmarie Mikaele Room 13

Annmarie (centre)  with friends Taine (Left)  and Manaomia (Right)

Introducing Author Marshall Tupai

FAMOUS ESOL POMARIA AUTHORS CLUB

The lion and the mouse

Narrative - Retell

                                                                                        

One hot boiling sunny day a lion was sleeping in a hot desert. 

A mouse came along and the lion grabbed it.  “Got you,” said the lion.

The mouse said, “Eeee-Eee-Eee!”  The mouse said, ‘I might help you one day.”

The lion laughed, “Ha! Ha! Ha!”  “A little mouse like you can’t help me.”

The lion got trapped in the net.  He roared, “Help me.  Who will help me?”

The mouse came along and chewed the net.

The lion ws free.

The lion said, “Thank you a lot.”  They were friends.

By Marshall Tupai  Room 13

Introducing Author Senio Afamasaga Vavao

Famous ESOL Pomaria Authors Club

The lion and the mouse

Narrative - Retell

                                                                                        

One hot boiling sunny day a lion was sleeping and the mouse jumped on the lion.

‘I got you!” he said.  “Eeeee-eeeee,” said the mouse.  “Please let get your hands off me.  I will come and help you one day.”

The lion let the mouse go.  The mouse ran into her hole. 

The lion laughed at the mouse.  The humungous lion walked into the net and got into trouble. 

The mouse came and helped the lion get out of the net.

“You can help a big lion like me.  I will leave you alone again,”  said the lion.

By Senio Afamasaga-Vavao

Room 17

Introducing Author Janaia Levao

The Icky Sticky Anteater

Narrative Retell

It was a beautiful morning.  There was a frog and a fly.  The frog was hungry so the frog ate the fly.  The frog went, ‘Woop!’  Out came his tongue so sticky and long.

Next came along a beetle eating a leaf.  “Woop!” out came his tongue so sticky and long. And the beetle was gone!  He ate the beetle like he ate the fly.

Frog eyed a grasshopper hopping around. Then he said, “Shhhh!”  Out came his tongue so sticky and long.  Frog swallowed.  Gulp!  The grasshopper was gone! 

He found a colourful butterfly.  But guess what…..

A big golden fish gobbled the frog.  GULP!  Then the frog was gone!

The butterfly was safe and sound. 

By Janaia Levao Room 14

Janaia (Left) and friend Emilia.